Keep your opinions of me

September 1, 2011
By GretaGibson PLATINUM, Vancouver, Other
GretaGibson PLATINUM, Vancouver, Other
23 articles 4 photos 23 comments

Projecting Shadows on my soul
Telling me who I am
I am so much more then your imagination could conjure
I will not bow down to your
painting of who you think i am
I will push through the fog of whispering decent
and come through stronger then i was on the other side

And when i am
Keep your opinions of me
and do not pretend that you ever thought otherwise of me
For you would paint another picture
of who im not
I am Strong
I will be free



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on Dec. 10 2011 at 2:25 am
DooRonRon SILVER, Barstow, California
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Favorite Quote:
If life hands you lemons, squirt juice in the enemy's eye!
"Dying would be an awful big adventure."- Peter Pan

beautiful and simple yet elegant, it definitely flowed, loved it!

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on Nov. 27 2011 at 10:43 pm
of course kendis this is amazing

on Nov. 27 2011 at 7:45 pm
ChocoMint SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is like swallowing hot chocolate before it has cooled off. It takes you by surprise at first, but keeps you warm for a long time." - Anonymous

"Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss and ends with a tear." - Anonymous

Liked it. The words flowed relatively well and you could see and hear the feeling.  Good one.  <><

on Nov. 27 2011 at 4:12 pm
GretaGibson PLATINUM, Vancouver, Other
23 articles 4 photos 23 comments
omigosh i hadn't even noticed that! thanks! :) and thanks for reading it

on Nov. 27 2011 at 3:46 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

i really really like this poem!!! can i make one suggestion? instead of

 "i will not bow down to your

painting of who you think i am"

maybe try

"i will not bow down to your paintings

of who you think i am"

but either way its a very good poem :)


on Nov. 27 2011 at 3:31 pm
GretaGibson PLATINUM, Vancouver, Other
23 articles 4 photos 23 comments

im glad that you could read the passion in it, i had written it just after a huge fight in my family that i was just sick of, so thanks for the comment

 


pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Nov. 27 2011 at 3:15 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Jeremiah 29:11

i love the passion in this one!


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