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Projecting Shadows on my soul
Telling me who I am
I am so much more then your imagination could conjure
I will not bow down to your
painting of who you think i am
I will push through the fog of whispering decent
and come through stronger then i was on the other side

And when i am
Keep your opinions of me
and do not pretend that you ever thought otherwise of me
For you would paint another picture
of who im not
I am Strong
I will be free





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ChocoMint said...
Nov. 27, 2011 at 7:45 pm
Liked it. The words flowed relatively well and you could see and hear the feeling.  Good one.  <><
 
DooRonRon replied...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 2:25 am
beautiful and simple yet elegant, it definitely flowed, loved it!
 
BeyondTheBrooke said...
Nov. 27, 2011 at 3:46 pm

i really really like this poem!!! can i make one suggestion? instead of

 "i will not bow down to your

painting of who you think i am"

maybe try

"i will not bow down to your paintings

of who you think i am"

but either way its a very good poem :)

 
KendisPiper This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 27, 2011 at 4:12 pm
omigosh i hadn't even noticed that! thanks! :) and thanks for reading it
 
. replied...
Nov. 27, 2011 at 10:43 pm
of course kendis this is amazing
 
pinkowl said...
Nov. 27, 2011 at 3:15 pm
i love the passion in this one!
 
KendisPiper This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 27, 2011 at 3:31 pm

im glad that you could read the passion in it, i had written it just after a huge fight in my family that i was just sick of, so thanks for the comment

 

 
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