Do I Take My Life

i like it! it short and its full of your thoughts and emotions! at first it doesnt sound like it fits together but when you read the whole thing it makes perfect sence

WOW that was amazing i love it it was the most amzaing poem ever ROCK ON!!!!!!!!!

awwww i'm sorry you feel or felt this way or if you know someone who feels or felt like this! I think that it's pretty amazing you can come out and write deep feelings like this just know that someone loves you even if it feels like no one does and remember something good comes out of something bad even if it takes a while you can learn from the bad experiences! Life is not easy but it's ok because it's not supposed to be if you want a good life. I hope that makes sense to you:)

wow... i'm so sorry to hear that.  i felt the same way too... i pray things start looking up for you. 

i luv it keep it up nd i hope you feel better

 

this is really short. the emotion doesn't appear to be that deep because there is so little being said. You seem like you don't even have this emotion  yourself. I feel like you watched someone else feel this and theen tried to write about it, which is worth doing. But just try to elaborate more and put in a little more emotion! :)

LOVE IT!! keep writing((: