I Can See The End

August 30, 2011
By TubaLady DIAMOND, Athens, Michigan
TubaLady DIAMOND, Athens, Michigan
89 articles 2 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know how it feels to be completely alone and helpless, and the last thing you want to hear in that situation is, 'It's going to be OK. ' The only thing that seems to really help is that someone else who has felt that low expressing those feelings"


Little do we know
We're all born to die
We come into this world

and we say good-bye
Some leave sooner than others
Some lives don't even begin
But I can see it now

everything comes to an end


The author's comments:
I was pondering the aspect of death when writing this. It's so abstract, yet still straightforward. We're born, we live, we die. The End. [Literally.]

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on Jan. 19 2012 at 3:12 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

This was great and yes so very true! Do you think you could check out one of my stories? Thank you! :)(:

on Nov. 16 2011 at 7:52 am
TubaLady DIAMOND, Athens, Michigan
89 articles 2 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know how it feels to be completely alone and helpless, and the last thing you want to hear in that situation is, 'It's going to be OK. ' The only thing that seems to really help is that someone else who has felt that low expressing those feelings"

Thanks, I didn't notice that before.

sng1993 SILVER said...
on Nov. 13 2011 at 11:21 am
sng1993 SILVER, Los Osos, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Whether or not you write well, write bravely."

so true and I like how the last line regarding "the end" is actually the end of the poem too. :)


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