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Let me write you a poem

A story unknown

About a girl and a boy sitting on their throne


He fell for her deeply in 10 seconds flat

She knew her father would be angry at that


She ran away but not too far

He sat steady alone in his car


He was not happy when they were apart

She wasn't either but had to depart



He followed her to the airport with no one around

She had heard nothing except for one sound


He needed to know if she felt the same

She turned around when she heard her name


She ran to him quickly with a fall to the floor

He picked her up swiftly and opened the door


He drove off slowly into the sky above

She grabbed his hand and knew it was love.




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torilutz8 said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 8:19 pm:
Really cute but kind of got confused at the end. Other than that it's really nice :)
 
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MsAnonymousThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 2:24 pm:
very cute poem! againthe syllables make it a little awkward but i still like it!
 
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JamieNicoleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 4:12 pm:
you are amazing Andi I love it.
 
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Loki17This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 6:21 pm:

Nice work, reminds me of romeo and juliet.  A bit short, though.

 

 
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iamMe97 said...
Sept. 12, 2011 at 7:25 pm:
i loved ittt 
 
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