From the Heart. My Heart.

September 3, 2011
By FiREproof PLATINUM, Morrisville, North Carolina
FiREproof PLATINUM, Morrisville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm Like a little dog chasing cars, i wouldn't know what to do with one if i caught it"--Joker--
"You either die a Hero or live lonq enuff to watch yourself become thu Villan"--Harvey Dent


The piano plays in my heart, and the song doesn't change.
I get drunk off another cup of love, but it doesn't kill the pain.
So I stumble to the sink and pour it down the drain.
I hope when you see me, you realize what we had.
I look in the mirror, and realize I look like my past.
I heard that dreams can come true, I throw a penny in a wishing well.
Then I see you again, and wish you well.
Things happen in life that can't be explained.
Just because you get hurt, doesn't mean you should completely stop playing.
I close my eyes and try to open my heart.
Tears flood from everywhere, I guess that's a start.


The author's comments:
I wrote it free handed, i didn't make any changes to it. I wrote what was in my heart at the moment. Please comment & enjoy.

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on Sep. 9 2011 at 5:53 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Well written indeed. There are not a few clever lines, and they really dig deeply into the mind of the reader (at least, for me). The second line, the fifth line and the last two lines, I felt, were the most meaningful to me. I really liked this and enjoyed reading it, and was delighted to discover that you wrote it free handed and without changing it; that's really the best way to do it for this kind of poem.

on Sep. 8 2011 at 2:10 am
RaindropsCatcher GOLD, Sofia, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“I laugh, I love, I hope, I try, I hurt, I need, I fear, I cry. And I know you do the same things too, So we're really not that different, me and you.”

I get drunk off another cup of love, but it doesn't kill the pain. 
So I stumble to the sink and pour it down the drain

 

I thought the metaphor was bittersweet. I liked it. Good job.


on Sep. 7 2011 at 5:04 pm
Laurel15 BRONZE, Eastlake, Colorado
4 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams." Eleanor Roosevelt

Very good!!! I'm impressed that you did this in the heat of the moment!

on Sep. 7 2011 at 4:36 pm
CrystalfromAMS SILVER, Noblesville, Indiana
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Awww! For some reason, I really liked this. :) I loved the few rhymes you had in there--it made it impacting. And the last line especially wrapped it up well. I can't believe you free-handed it! Well done!


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