The First time

September 3, 2011
By MaggieClaude SILVER, Randolph, Massachusetts
MaggieClaude SILVER, Randolph, Massachusetts
9 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
The most wasted of all days is one without laughter.


The first time I saw you, I was completely numb by your beauty, your white smile that made me hold my breath for so long. Was it true what I was feeling?
The first time you told me that you loved me, I thought I was already living in paradise. Your love for me made me feel invisible, enegetic and so on.
The first time that you kissed me, I thought that I already saw the redeemer Jesus-Christ, au contraire by making full circles with your hands around my thighs I felt like I was in heaven.
The first time, the very first time that I met your very charming self, you locked me with your warm body that made me feel like being in your arms was the only safe and peaceful place there could be.
I will never forget these first times ever.


The author's comments:
This peice is all about how someone made me feel without even knowing who that person realy was.

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on Sep. 10 2011 at 4:46 pm
softballbabe2014 SILVER, Wimberley, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Smile now, Cry later." "everything happens for a reason"

no problem girly(:

on Sep. 10 2011 at 2:37 pm
MaggieClaude SILVER, Randolph, Massachusetts
9 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
The most wasted of all days is one without laughter.

aww!! you girls are soo nice. your comments make me want to not only keep writing but also share my pieces. Thanks to all of you.

on Sep. 8 2011 at 10:07 pm
softballbabe2014 SILVER, Wimberley, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Smile now, Cry later." "everything happens for a reason"

i agree with sami & sandra (:

on Sep. 8 2011 at 2:34 pm
LiebeUndFrieden BRONZE, Corpus Christi, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Me With Out You Is Like
A Sneaker With Out Laces
A Geek With Out Braces
AsentenceWithOutSpaces
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i agree with sami, this is super cute and i can relate, (:

on Sep. 7 2011 at 5:43 pm
MaggieClaude SILVER, Randolph, Massachusetts
9 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
The most wasted of all days is one without laughter.

awww!!! Thank you, I apprecaite that.

on Sep. 6 2011 at 9:09 pm
SamiLynn PLATINUM, Anthem, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"The unexamined life is not worth living." ~Socrates

this is sweet :) i can relate




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