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Don’t cry
Don’t speak
Don’t shake and don’t despair
All I ask
is that you remember
Not forever
Not always
But remember for now
The fleeting moments
The bittersweet goodbyes
The warmth in your hands
The twinge in your breath
The sloppy kisses

Please,
Just remember what was said
Remember what it meant
Don’t let the thought linger
But simply let it be born
Pass through
Die
And know it was there
Never doubt
You remembered

Embers
And ashes
Will beg you
To remember
What they mean
But I don’t care about that
Just remember what they meant
That once
Just once
When you smiled
Into my neck
Told me a secret
F***** me up

Do you remember
What ‘I love you’ means?
How to say it?
It doesn’t have to be a lie, you know
Do you remember
How to believe it?
How to mean it?
Can you tell me where it goes
When it’s not true anymore?

Please, for me
Remember the truth
Just for a moment,
Remember
How you love me
Think of me
Kiss me
F*** me up
Remember
Please
Not forever
Not always
But now.
Just now
Remember me

Hold this memory
In your shaking fist
Whisper with your quivering lips
And then please,
Forget me
Please, forget me




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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 5:48 pm:

You get a lot of comments, so I don't know if it's worth it to speak as sincerely as I feel. But I suppose that's the best thing to do. :)

This poem meant quite a lot to me, because some of the lines were so deep and familiar that I felt like they came out of my heart and not yours! That's partly 'cause you're creating something here which a lot of people can relate to, yet you're not making it dull and common. And it takes a lot of talent to do that. 

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HannahPaigeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 23, 2011 at 9:40 am :
i really appreciate the review and i'm glad you could relate to it!
 
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Bradymb94 said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 10:25 pm:
Love it! :)
 
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Sonja32195 said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 7:01 pm:
ok, we all at one point feel this exact same way. and reading it we all instantly think back to one person, feeling the same way you expressed yourself in the poem. i love it.
 
HannahPaigeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 8:02 pm :
thanks! i started writing it about nothing, but then i started thinking about that one person you're talking about.. so i guess you're right
 
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lollipop900 said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 5:24 pm:

oh my lord. 

this made me almost cry.

its so..real.

<3

 
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WeAllBurn said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 12:19 pm:

wow. amazing. <3

period. at a loss for words <3.

definitley favoring this.

 
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jazzyj001 said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 8:51 am:
i loved this poem i thought ity was amazing!!!!! it was just great
 
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she-is-a-strange-duckThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 7, 2011 at 7:18 pm:
Beautiful :')
 
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emmatheballerina said...
Sept. 7, 2011 at 2:36 pm:
That was beautiful. I felt like i was there in the poem. Great job
 
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crazygirl said...
Sept. 7, 2011 at 10:23 am:
soo touching! <3
 
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roadrunner said...
Sept. 7, 2011 at 6:33 am:
Holy goodness this is touching!!1 <3
 
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HerDreamsGiveHerWings said...
Sept. 7, 2011 at 12:27 am:

That was beautiful :D 

You have a talent.

and I agree with SamiLynn! super powerful tone

 
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SamiLynn said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 9:12 pm:
i got INTO this poem dude! that was powerful
 
HannahPaigeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 8:40 pm :
thankyou, glad you liked it
 
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