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holes? or no?...

August 27, 2011
By unknown2theworld BRONZE, Burlington, North Carolina
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The pain is deep
Like a hole in your chest
Thoughts flow back
To hard to let go
Knots never being let loose
To see the true colors
It's to see the rainbow
Them three little words made me feel like this
The pain is deep
But the hole is now replaced

© LZ A., Grand Junction, CO

The author's comments:
This one is about love and being in what it made you feel like during and after. I wrote this cause I know people out there done been hurt and they hold on but if you do that. The hole will never get replaced only bigger.
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