Mirror

August 11, 2011
By Sarah1311 DIAMOND, Clackamas, Oregon
Sarah1311 DIAMOND, Clackamas, Oregon
54 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To the world you may not be someone, but to someone you may be the world" and "Never frown because you never know who's fallen in love with your smile" <3


When I look in the mirror
I see someone,
but she doesn't look like me.

She looks beautiful and fragile,
but then I see,
the girl is broken and hurt,
trembling in pain,

Sorrow has built in her,
Walls of rain.

She tries to stay strong
but sometimes it can't be helped,
the emotion is to much,
more then she's ever felt.

She tries to be happy,
to have fun with her friends,
but eventually
all that happiness ends.



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on Nov. 9 2011 at 8:30 am
Patricia012795 SILVER, Roy, Washington
7 articles 6 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Too many to pick!

I loved your poem. It made me relate because I feel like that. Thank you for sharing your beautiful work.

on Oct. 13 2011 at 2:13 pm
Sarah1311 DIAMOND, Clackamas, Oregon
54 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To the world you may not be someone, but to someone you may be the world" and "Never frown because you never know who's fallen in love with your smile" <3

Thank you, i'll try that. :)

on Sep. 1 2011 at 7:37 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
45 articles 9 photos 565 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

Beautiful as usual.  Your images are so pretty, if you used metaphors I think they would really add to your poem.


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