Leaving Life

August 25, 2011
By StuieWLG SILVER, Dublin, Other
StuieWLG SILVER, Dublin, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'I did not attend the funeral but i approved of it'-Mark Twain
'Every man must see to hope. For without hope, there is no man to see ' -Stuie Larner


Breathe in, Breathe out
The same two steps for every day.
Breathe in, Breathe out
Are there any words left to say?

Breathe in, Breathe out,
She looks to me with those green eyes.
Breathe in, Breathe out,
She looks at me and slowly cries.

Breathe in, Breathe out,
She searches me with those green eyes.
Breathe in, Breathe out,
I watch her as she slowly dies.


The author's comments:
I wrote this after experiencing bereavement. I hope that when people who have had similar experiences read this they know that it's okay to feel deeply when a loved one passes on.

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on Sep. 25 2011 at 4:44 am
StuieWLG SILVER, Dublin, Other
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
'I did not attend the funeral but i approved of it'-Mark Twain
'Every man must see to hope. For without hope, there is no man to see ' -Stuie Larner

can someone please comment my writing? really looking for opinions! :)

 





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