Dreams

August 26, 2011
By BookOwl PLATINUM, Bristol, Tennessee
BookOwl PLATINUM, Bristol, Tennessee
32 articles 5 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is hard to fail, but it is worse never to have tried to succeed." Theodore Roosevelt


I let my mind wander, to a faraway place.
Hoping time, would not become misplaced.
Creatures of sorts, and all different race.
Castles of crystal, twists of fate.
Things of imagination, only one can create.
Millions of colors, only words away.
People surround me, they seem to hallucinate.
Trapped, have to get away.
Running, but never seeming to move.
Screaming, waking up in the night.
Panic, everything's alright.



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on Sep. 27 2011 at 11:35 am
introducingshelby GOLD, San Diego, California
15 articles 1 photo 139 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People change so you can learn to let go, things go wrong so you can appreciate them when they go right, and things fall apart so better things can fall together."
-Marilyn Monroe

Squeaks has got the right idea; anyways, I liked this. It was refreshing to know I'm not the only one who screams in terror of my dreams ._.

Dewolf said...
on Sep. 22 2011 at 3:18 pm
I also agree with the others. It is so hard to keep up the rhyme scheme, but you pulled it off. And very smoothly, might I add!

on Sep. 12 2011 at 9:35 pm
I agree with Squeaks. You basically capured the feeling of a dream in a few lines. Splendid!

Squeaks BRONZE said...
on Aug. 30 2011 at 7:27 pm
Squeaks BRONZE, Glen Allen, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some people just don't know when to quit." --from the back of my XC team's 200 summer mile club T-shirt

This is so good, so true, and I love anyone who has enough talent to rhyme it all and still make a load of sense. Congrats.




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