August 26, 2011
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I let my mind wander, to a faraway place.
Hoping time, would not become misplaced.
Creatures of sorts, and all different race.
Castles of crystal, twists of fate.
Things of imagination, only one can create.
Millions of colors, only words away.
People surround me, they seem to hallucinate.
Trapped, have to get away.
Running, but never seeming to move.
Screaming, waking up in the night.
Panic, everything's alright.

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Dewolf said...
Sept. 22, 2011 at 3:18 pm
I also agree with the others. It is so hard to keep up the rhyme scheme, but you pulled it off. And very smoothly, might I add!
mercebeinyata said...
Sept. 12, 2011 at 9:35 pm
I agree with Squeaks. You basically capured the feeling of a dream in a few lines. Splendid!
Squeaks said...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 7:27 pm
This is so good, so true, and I love anyone who has enough talent to rhyme it all and still make a load of sense. Congrats.
introducingshelby replied...
Sept. 27, 2011 at 11:35 am
Squeaks has got the right idea; anyways, I liked this. It was refreshing to know I'm not the only one who screams in terror of my dreams ._.
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