Life's whatever you make it

August 26, 2011
Life can be more than you could ever ask
Or getting up and living can seem like a hard task
You can become anything
Or nothing

You can be happy that you wake up every morning
Or angry that someone broke your deep sleep
Friends and love could mean it all to you
Or it could mean nothing more to you than a speck of dust

Depression can be just another word
And it can also be the death of you
Lifes like a blank sheet of paper
You can write your own story...anwyay you want too

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JayceeGirl said...
Nov. 23, 2012 at 11:02 pm
Really good. I keep trying to tell mysef basically the same thing every day! added to my favs :)
HarryPotterLover30 said...
Jun. 16, 2012 at 9:14 pm

Yet AGAIN, love it!!!!!!!!!! Completely agree


Purple158 said...
Jun. 15, 2012 at 7:45 pm
This is so true! The last 2 lines are my favorite! Please check out my work, I would  apprecaite it! Keep writting you got talent! :)
Loki17 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 7:34 pm
Inspiring message... really demonstrates the power of free will.
Camii said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 5:52 pm
i like the poem and the message it has(:
BeyondTheBrooke said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 5:52 pm
wow.....this is powerful and very very good
Sarah said...
Sept. 15, 2011 at 2:55 pm
Great job!
Squeaks said...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 7:33 pm
I love the poems that come to you in 3 minutes-- sometimes they're the best. Like this one, it's pretty good. :)
iW0ntRunThisTime said...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 11:15 am
I like this a lot - especially the first 2 lines of the 2nd verse, they're a good representation of how certain people live their lives :) However, I think the poem could be a little more fluid.
CarolinaBoy23 replied...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 6:44 pm
Thanks! yeah i probably could've wrote it better but i wrote this in like 3 im proud of it haha
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