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Why can't you see through the glass walls
That I've put up around my heart?
They're always being cracked and chipped
As my emotions tear me apart.

Why can't you reach out to me,
To show me that someone cares?
It feels like there's nobody rooting for me,
And it really isn't fair.

Why can't you see that I'm dying inside,
Waiting for you to see
That these glass walls are under repair
Because of how much you mean to me...





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SarahGrac3 said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 4:08 pm
I really liked this and it reminded me of myself. You're a great writer! I'd love it if had time to look at my poems...Thanks:)
 
IceQueen replied...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 8:45 pm
Thanks, and I'd love to!
 
dancestar said...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 1:24 pm
tht was awesome! great job! i wrote a poem called "A Love Unreciprocated" and its pending publishing...check it out in a couple of days..i think you'll like it :)
 
IceQueen replied...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 8:44 pm
Thanks, I will!
 
Briii95 said...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 12:58 pm
i love this poem, it explains how i felt w. my best guy friend, i told him how i felt & it felt better just to get it off my chest&he actually felt the same,we fell in love<3 it doesnt hurt to tell him,or show him this poem.(: keep writing!
 
IceQueen replied...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 8:43 pm
Thank you so much!  Maybe I will... If I ever can get up the courage...
 
HahlehAnn said...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 12:49 pm
beautiful ...you should tell that person or atleast show this to them..
 
IceQueen replied...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 8:43 pm
Maybe...I don't know...
 
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