Little Tides

August 24, 2011
By TheEldritchPrince SILVER, Stockbridge, Georgia
TheEldritchPrince SILVER, Stockbridge, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Logic is not flawless


Little tides flowing ‘round.
Flowing ‘round homeward bound.

Some are shattered, some are lost,
Swirling into brand new thoughts.

Spinning maelstrom, forwards lost,
Spinning faster than the sounds,
Waves and swirls like broken glass,
Spinning forwards,
Forwards lost,
The purple swirls aglow with thoughts.

The author's comments:
This just came into my head and onto paper one day.

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on Jul. 23 2012 at 5:14 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

Great job! Nice use of vocab as well! Keep up the good work! :D

 

~Free :)(:


K.T.Bugg said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 5:01 pm
K.T.Bugg, Strawberry, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
Where there is love, there is God.

very nice poem. well organized and creative. love it!

on Jan. 11 2012 at 10:21 am
twinsisterslove BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
You only live once, but if you work it right, once is enough.

Two thumbs up!


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