Little Tides

August 24, 2011
Little tides flowing ‘round.
Flowing ‘round homeward bound.

Some are shattered, some are lost,
Swirling into brand new thoughts.

Spinning maelstrom, forwards lost,
Spinning faster than the sounds,
Waves and swirls like broken glass,
Spinning forwards,
Forwards lost,
The purple swirls aglow with thoughts.

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K.T.Bugg said...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 5:01 pm
very nice poem. well organized and creative. love it!
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Jul. 23, 2012 at 5:14 pm

Great job! Nice use of vocab as well! Keep up the good work! :D


~Free :)(:

twinsisterslove said...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 10:21 am
Two thumbs up!
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