What's Left?

August 23, 2011
By jaylw GOLD, Southgate, Michigan
jaylw GOLD, Southgate, Michigan
18 articles 8 photos 44 comments

Now everything I thought I knew was a lie

doesn’t it feel great!

You have said so many different things I don’t even know what is the truth anymore.

Well this is the truth you’re giving me

That im just another one to the list, and scratched off, like nothing

Well thank you, I have learned a lot, and became who I wanted to,

Learned where I am ment to be.

Just saddens me, to see this, one day you will know

and I feel sorry for the next, its obviously not me

For all those who have to live in the shadow beware, and best of luck

Am I wrong to say all this? When yet I am one?

What is it that keeps me? What I thought it was, mustn’t after the new truth I received

Or is it just another part of the real truth yet to be reviled?

Only time will tell,

We will find our truths and destinies, or maybe

Were just part of this game of love

If that’s even what it is anymore

Best of luck to all the players,

May all of you find the real truth,

I am just a pawn, but a strong one

I will make it to the other side


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jaylw GOLD said...
on Sep. 1 2011 at 12:53 am
jaylw GOLD, Southgate, Michigan
18 articles 8 photos 44 comments
thanks!! check out my other work coments are apprecated!!

jaylw GOLD said...
on Sep. 1 2011 at 12:53 am
jaylw GOLD, Southgate, Michigan
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thanks you!! and i am honnered to be the first one you read, i have alot more please check them out and coment tell your friends!! thank you

jaylw GOLD said...
on Aug. 30 2011 at 12:15 am
jaylw GOLD, Southgate, Michigan
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thanks you!! yes i will, i have many more if you want to check them out

on Aug. 29 2011 at 4:16 pm
Anonymous_7 SILVER, Branson, Missouri
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-The only time you can get away with murder is when writing a book!

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on Aug. 29 2011 at 1:28 pm
dalty PLATINUM, Gaithersburg, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
That at a certain point in our lives, we lose control of what's happening to us, and our lives become controlled by fate. That's the world's greatest lie." - Paulo Coelho

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on Aug. 29 2011 at 10:24 am
Dr.GuessWhat GOLD, Romeo, Michigan
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