Under a bright white moom

August 22, 2011
By thinkofsomethingbetter GOLD, Tallmadge, Ohio
thinkofsomethingbetter GOLD, Tallmadge, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
in short, being vegen just makes you better then everyone else.
- scott pilgrim vs the world. best movie ever!


You turned your back and started to walk away, leaving me in your shadow.

I counted to number of step you took away from what was us

1,2...19...32

hoping against hope that this was just another elaborate joke.

...45,46,47,48...

silent tears streaming down my face, fell to an unknown below.

...59, 60...65,66...

"Come back," I called.

But you didn't hear me; the ridge between us to great for my small voice you loved so much.

You were out of ear shot around 72.

...73,74...

Around 76, I stopped seeing you and realized it was just me and the bright white moon.

And you didn't hear me say "I'm sorry".



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on Dec. 5 2011 at 7:00 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

No, I LOVE IT!!!!  It's just very depressing!!

on Dec. 5 2011 at 6:18 pm
thinkofsomethingbetter GOLD, Tallmadge, Ohio
10 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
in short, being vegen just makes you better then everyone else.
- scott pilgrim vs the world. best movie ever!

does that mean you dont like it?...

on Oct. 17 2011 at 11:21 am
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 488 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

This poem is so depressing!!!  And the numbers counting it's like, ohhh......and then 76 and I was like frowny face! :(


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