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August 24, 2011
By MJG11 SILVER, Scottsville, New York
MJG11 SILVER, Scottsville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Federal Agents could be tracking you right now for even considering the name Muhammad."

"Dad, you were like a father to me."

"You are on crack, alright? And not the good kind."


I remember the night you left all too clear,
It’s been 3 months, 5 days, and a year.
But I’m still hoping you’re going to turn your car around.
I hate myself for never making a sound.
I’ll be waiting,
Until I run out of time.
I hope you can see,
That I’m not fine.

Ring the doorbell,
Like you always used to.
Maybe then I’ll come out of this shell,
But now I don’t know if I’ll ever trust you.
You broke me in half,
You left me to put back the pieces.
No matter how many times I tried,
I couldn’t them get back, how they were.



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on Aug. 28 2011 at 2:37 pm
MissAutumnRose BRONZE, Earlysville, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Do not meddle in the affairs of Dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup."

Really pretty, but I felt like the ending was just a little bit forced. Maybe try to see if you can get it to flow a little better.

on Aug. 27 2011 at 4:55 pm
XxTickleM3EmoxX PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
L.Why is everyone O. trying to find it? V. Maybe it's hidden for a reason...E.

If you look in the mirror and dont like what you see, you might find out first hand what its like to be me...

great poem! :D




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