Never Ending Night

August 23, 2011
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In the never ending night, you have to fight.
My heart grows thin, to no end.
No time to run, scream to the wind.
Panic, it never ends.
Find the light, never ending night.

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Dewolf said...
Sept. 22, 2011 at 3:20 pm
For such little words, this poem really packed a punch! The fear and panic was so real, that my heart started to race a little. Keep up the good work and don't stop writing or photography!
mercebeinyata said...
Sept. 12, 2011 at 9:37 pm
You did a great job of capturing the feeling of fear in this poem; I can already feel my heart starting to race. Bravo!
Odessa_Sterling00 said...
Sept. 6, 2011 at 5:45 pm
Great job!  This actually reminded me of a limrick instead of a free verse. 
introducingshelby said...
Aug. 26, 2011 at 7:35 pm
I like this. Brill :D
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