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The Love They Share

August 20, 2011
By xmichellexdawnx BRONZE, Millinocket, Maine
xmichellexdawnx BRONZE, Millinocket, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
By plucking her petals, you do not gather the beauty of the flower. ~Rabindrath Tagore


The couple holds hands,
Smiles plastered on faces,
Talking quietly.
I'm walking in front,
Smiling at their love;
A love they share.

Dinnertime.
The couple sits close
As close as possible.
I'm watching from my seat,
Smiling at their love,
A love they share.

Weekend.
Movies in the room;
The couple snuggles.
I'm sitting in my place,
Sneaking glances at
A love they share.

Homework.
The couple completes,
Talking together.
I'm reading,
Eyeing the love
The love they share.

Forever,
The couple lasts.
Holding hands, smiling.
I'm a bridesmaid
Watching the flowering
Of the love they share.


The author's comments:
This is a valentines day present for some wonderful people at my school =]

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on Aug. 29 2011 at 4:53 pm
Shadowfoxz DIAMOND, Washington D.C, District Of Columbia
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I have new work coming out every week. Yaay.

You're very welcome! I'll be sure to check you out in the future :)

on Aug. 29 2011 at 4:50 pm
Shadowfoxz DIAMOND, Washington D.C, District Of Columbia
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I have new work coming out every week. Yaay.

You're so very welcome :)

on Aug. 29 2011 at 2:11 pm
xmichellexdawnx BRONZE, Millinocket, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
By plucking her petals, you do not gather the beauty of the flower. ~Rabindrath Tagore

Thank you so much!

on Aug. 29 2011 at 12:26 pm
Shadowfoxz DIAMOND, Washington D.C, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
I have new work coming out every week. Yaay.

Awww...very...cute lol. When you say the love is flowering and blossoming, that really gets through in this poem. It is as if there is a flower of love growing as each stanza passes :)