Brand New

August 11, 2011
By Sarah1311 DIAMOND, Clackamas, Oregon
Sarah1311 DIAMOND, Clackamas, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"To the world you may not be someone, but to someone you may be the world" and "Never frown because you never know who's fallen in love with your smile" <3


So safe in your arms,
don't ever let me go,
So gentle and loving
but only I seem to know.

With you I feel alive,
so awake,
like there's nothing in this world
that I couldn't take.

Though now your gone,
and my sorrow shows,
and my heart aches more
then you could ever know.

Your sweet words
used to make me feel
as if I could fly,
but now the torture
of seeing you with her
just makes me want to cry.

But I suck it up,
and tell myself,
your gone,
it can't be helped.

I say I'll get over you,
and someday I hope I will.

Till then I plant a smile
on my face,
and positive words
in my mouth,
hoping no one will notice the pain
I've been dealt.

Though someday I will find someone,
twice the man as you,
one who truly cares,
someone brand new.



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on Oct. 13 2011 at 2:09 pm
Sarah1311 DIAMOND, Clackamas, Oregon
54 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To the world you may not be someone, but to someone you may be the world" and "Never frown because you never know who's fallen in love with your smile" <3

Thank you much dear, I actually have inspiration for positivity now. :)

on Aug. 26 2011 at 1:26 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

This is positive poem, I like it.  The meter is off in a few places but other than that it's a pretty good poem.


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