The Pattern

August 20, 2011
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Everyone is easily blinded,
Then they do faults,
Then they regret,
Then they are forgiven.

It seems to be a pattern,
Don't you agree?
That humans are stubborn,
They never learn.

They tend to forget,
After what was forgiven,
Then they do it again,
That is the pattern.





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ManaMay said...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 10:29 am
i agree... that's why there are so many problems, if people actually learned from their mistakes there would be no more problems. 
 
Blue4 said...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 5:22 pm

I really like this, the pattern of words is enthralling. Sadly, this pattern you mentioned is an inevitable part of the human being.

Could you please read some of my work, rate, and let me know what you think?

 
Kenniekonglee replied...
Aug. 26, 2011 at 10:24 pm

thanks for da comment! appreciated!

 

sure!  i will L: 

 
ManaMay said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 1:08 pm
i agree completely with your writing. knowing that you will be forgive gives you the sense to repaeat your actions. 
 
Kenniekonglee replied...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 3:41 am

Aww... thanks, it really means so much to me~!

yup, i wrote this piece when i was tired of my classmates doing faults over and over again, a piece in anger... thanks soo much for the comment!

 
ManaMay replied...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 2:43 pm

yeah no problem :) & i know what you mean i see people repaeting the same mistakes over and over.

Einstien's definition of insanity was repating the same thing over and over again and expecting a different out come. 

 
Kenniekonglee replied...
Aug. 26, 2011 at 10:26 pm

people will never learn~

thats what we call human beings... sad... 

 
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