The Pattern

August 20, 2011
By Kenniekonglee PLATINUM, Ampang, Other
Kenniekonglee PLATINUM, Ampang, Other
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. Just smile L:


Everyone is easily blinded,
Then they do faults,
Then they regret,
Then they are forgiven.

It seems to be a pattern,
Don't you agree?
That humans are stubborn,
They never learn.

They tend to forget,
After what was forgiven,
Then they do it again,
That is the pattern.


The author's comments:
A piece written when i was learning.

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ManaMay GOLD said...
on Sep. 19 2011 at 10:29 am
ManaMay GOLD, Port Huron, Michigan
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** We are heroes with a thousand faces**
*I swim for brighter days despite the absence of sun*

i agree... that's why there are so many problems, if people actually learned from their mistakes there would be no more problems. 

on Aug. 26 2011 at 10:26 pm
Kenniekonglee PLATINUM, Ampang, Other
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. Just smile L:

people will never learn~

thats what we call human beings... sad... 


on Aug. 26 2011 at 10:24 pm
Kenniekonglee PLATINUM, Ampang, Other
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thanks for da comment! appreciated!

 

sure!  i will L: 


on Aug. 25 2011 at 5:22 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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I'd rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn't do.
-Red Scott

I really like this, the pattern of words is enthralling. Sadly, this pattern you mentioned is an inevitable part of the human being.

Could you please read some of my work, rate, and let me know what you think?


ManaMay GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2011 at 2:43 pm
ManaMay GOLD, Port Huron, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
** We are heroes with a thousand faces**
*I swim for brighter days despite the absence of sun*

yeah no problem :) & i know what you mean i see people repaeting the same mistakes over and over.

Einstien's definition of insanity was repating the same thing over and over again and expecting a different out come. 


on Aug. 25 2011 at 3:41 am
Kenniekonglee PLATINUM, Ampang, Other
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. Just smile L:

Aww... thanks, it really means so much to me~!

yup, i wrote this piece when i was tired of my classmates doing faults over and over again, a piece in anger... thanks soo much for the comment!


ManaMay GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 1:08 pm
ManaMay GOLD, Port Huron, Michigan
11 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
** We are heroes with a thousand faces**
*I swim for brighter days despite the absence of sun*

i agree completely with your writing. knowing that you will be forgive gives you the sense to repaeat your actions. 


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