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Lover To Loveless

words do not hurt
but your words do
my love for you
quickly became pain
when you insulted me
coming from you
those words stung
like the venom
from a snake
i feel dead
and i blame myself
for not being good enough for you to even look at





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theatercamper112 said...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 11:20 am
This was very good. Well written. Keep writing!
 
XxTickleM3EmoxX This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 9:33 pm
i really enjoy this, very deep! keep writitng! :)
 
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