The Institution

August 14, 2011
By Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.


Where is the rainbow without the rain?
Where is the pleasure without the pain? 
Well without you I'd probably just go insane 
They 'd lock me up in a mental institution 
And give me novacaine to numb the pain I'm in
It'd be a sin if I lost you
Almost like you're the loss but there would be no win 
And come to think about it did you change you're PIN?
I haven't been able to contact you since I checked in 
They said I was here for a reason but I didn't understand why
When they locked me in this room they said they heard me cry
They said I was delusional and you were never coming back 
Now that right there is a joke I'm going to go pack
They say I'm going to crack any second now and possibly loose my mind
They say I started loosing it when you stabbed me from behind 
It killed me when you hurt me so I decided I should die 
That's how I got in this joint because I started to try
I miss you more then ever now my only friend is a fly 
He's on the wall when we talk until he says goodbye
He leaves when the doctor comes in they inject me with this pin 
Although God didn't say so I think it is a sin 
Because when it is jabbed into me thats when monsters start to crawl 
They told me to get over you and then I started to bawl 
My friend is back now he is on the wall 
The doctors said I can give you this letter when I return in the fall 
You have to meet my other friend Paul 
I think that's his name 
Mr. Fly and his friends all look the same 
We always play this game 
It's called who can disappear before the doctor chooses
I'm usually the one that looses 
They let me see someone today I mean an actual person 
She's the most beautiful thing I've ever seen
And her name is Irene
She says our flies talk to each other and her boyfriend stabbed her too
We might have to break up now because its what time will do 
I need you to know I love you though and I'll see ya very soon 
Hugs and kisses from the Institution
From You know who.



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Honour SILVER said...
on Jul. 26 2012 at 9:29 am
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13

"Give me liberty or give me death!" ~Patrick Henry

Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6

"I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery" ~ Thomas Jefferson

Wow this is good, it sucks you in when you first start readin' it.  Good job, Triumph!  

Rain. SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2012 at 7:16 pm
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

I will never stop writing!

Rain. SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2012 at 7:15 pm
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

Thanks I love you too.

Rain. SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2012 at 7:15 pm
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
7 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

Thanks, it's true, love is a hate/love relationship.

Rain. SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2012 at 7:14 pm
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

Thanks, I did check it out :)

Rain. SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2012 at 7:13 pm
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

Thank you! I will consider that before posting next time.

Rain. SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2012 at 7:12 pm
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

I wrote it as if it were a letter, but it rhymes enough to be a poem :P

Rain. SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2012 at 7:10 pm
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

I don't think that I intended it to be as sad it has a happy ending though :)

Rain. SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2012 at 7:09 pm
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

Thank you very much!

on Jul. 22 2012 at 6:37 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

Wow! I was hookes with the first two lines. Nice job this is really, really good. Keep writting!

Rain. SILVER said...
on Jun. 12 2012 at 3:42 pm
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

Yes, I'm thinking of revising it, I'll take the syllables into account ahem I do

Rain. SILVER said...
on Jun. 12 2012 at 3:11 pm
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

Sorry, if I ever do a revise of this poem I will be sure to take that into consideration :)

Rain. SILVER said...
on Jun. 12 2012 at 3:10 pm
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
7 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

Aha, thanks, I don't pay attention to word flow too much. Glad you liked it though. 

Rain. SILVER said...
on Jun. 12 2012 at 3:10 pm
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
7 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

Thank you soo much! 

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on Mar. 27 2012 at 8:18 pm
deleted, Miami, Florida
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I love this!!!!!! Keep it up this is awesome!

on Jan. 2 2012 at 10:43 am
U2_Fanatic GOLD, Westbury, Other
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O_O WOW! That's pretty amazing! I love the flow of the words, especially the end!

TapTap SILVER said...
on Dec. 27 2011 at 8:27 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

The beginning and end flow really nicely, the middle could flow a bit better. Otherwise i love it. Great work!

on Dec. 10 2011 at 2:21 pm
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
108 articles 2 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

wow this poem really made me believe in what the the poem says. maybe rearranging syllabes will help it flow better but other than that i like it alot!

on Nov. 27 2011 at 9:03 pm
MissSarahLeah GOLD, Clarkston, Michigan
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Lovely, sad, but lovely. Nice work.

on Nov. 27 2011 at 9:00 pm
reyess_anai BRONZE, Corona, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Every deep thinker is more afraid of being understood than misunderstood." Nietzsche

I think it's amazing. I like how you described what the other people thought and how you sen the hugs and kisses. cute.


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