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Through the Window

I see them together
Tender
Both adorable,
Young
I feel no envy,
Definite
In their happiness

Satisfaction
Fills me as I gaze
Wondering
At the miracle I see
Assuming
They have everything
Unquestionable

Such different lives
Surviving
Barely. Whereas they appear
Confident
In their identity
Together
So perfect





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ChocoMint said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 8:14 pm
Very nice! You do very nicely with the rythm and metering.  Keep it up. You write good poetry!  <><
 
ChocoMint replied...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 8:15 pm
I meant to rate it five stars but accidentally clicked four!!!!! AAAHHHH!!!! Sorry, but it's the thought that counts right?  =+P
 
sunny.all.day. replied...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 8:17 pm
Wow, thanks! And I promise  I'll get to your stuff ... well maybe now :P (I'm in the middle of hw....)
 
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