Through the Window

August 13, 2011
By sunny.all.day. GOLD, Potomac, Maryland
sunny.all.day. GOLD, Potomac, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day so I never have to live without you."
— A.A. Milne (Winnie-the-Pooh)
"writing is a struggle against silence" carlos fuentos
You miss 100% of the shots you don't take."


I see them together
Tender
Both adorable,
Young
I feel no envy,
Definite
In their happiness

Satisfaction
Fills me as I gaze
Wondering
At the miracle I see
Assuming
They have everything
Unquestionable

Such different lives
Surviving
Barely. Whereas they appear
Confident
In their identity
Together
So perfect

The author's comments:
I wrote this after seeing my friend and his girlfriend together, and they looked so happy and perfect :) something nice to see on a rainy day

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on Oct. 11 2011 at 8:17 pm
sunny.all.day. GOLD, Potomac, Maryland
15 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day so I never have to live without you."
— A.A. Milne (Winnie-the-Pooh)
"writing is a struggle against silence" carlos fuentos
You miss 100% of the shots you don't take."

Wow, thanks! And I promise  I'll get to your stuff ... well maybe now :P (I'm in the middle of hw....)

on Oct. 11 2011 at 8:15 pm
ChocoMint SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is like swallowing hot chocolate before it has cooled off. It takes you by surprise at first, but keeps you warm for a long time." - Anonymous

"Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss and ends with a tear." - Anonymous

I meant to rate it five stars but accidentally clicked four!!!!! AAAHHHH!!!! Sorry, but it's the thought that counts right?  =+P

on Oct. 11 2011 at 8:14 pm
ChocoMint SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
7 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is like swallowing hot chocolate before it has cooled off. It takes you by surprise at first, but keeps you warm for a long time." - Anonymous

"Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss and ends with a tear." - Anonymous

Very nice! You do very nicely with the rythm and metering.  Keep it up. You write good poetry!  <><


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