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You left me...
Buried in love letters
Drenched in tears
Saturated with anger.
But it's all meaningless.

You left me...
And I wanted to die.
Wanted to sleep it all away.
Act like it never happened.
But that's all a lie.

I gave you what you wanted.
All I had.
All I earned.
All I could.
But you left me...

You left me...
Alone...
Cold...
Sad...
BROKEN.



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WeAllBurn said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 12:10 pm:

i liked this one(:. it portrays sadness and hurt very well, but maybe add a little more just like Marlyre said.

but overall pretty great (:

please check out some of my work. (:

 
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Marlyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 1, 2011 at 5:25 pm:

I feel like this is just skeleton for more awesomeness... describe what went on, and if anything, you could try playing with the format to make it look broken.

Keep it up!

 
aveawave replied...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 2:13 pm :
thanks! I'll definately add to it! :D
 
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