Broken

August 17, 2011
By aveawave GOLD, Woolwich, New Jersey
aveawave GOLD, Woolwich, New Jersey
10 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the angel you're sworn to be: spread your wings and fly" :)


You left me...
Buried in love letters
Drenched in tears
Saturated with anger.
But it's all meaningless.

You left me...
And I wanted to die.
Wanted to sleep it all away.
Act like it never happened.
But that's all a lie.

I gave you what you wanted.
All I had.
All I earned.
All I could.
But you left me...

You left me...
Alone...
Cold...
Sad...
BROKEN.



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on Sep. 8 2011 at 12:10 pm
WeAllBurn PLATINUM, Vermilion, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong." ~Mahatma Gandhi

i liked this one(:. it portrays sadness and hurt very well, but maybe add a little more just like Marlyre said.

but overall pretty great (:

please check out some of my work. (:


aveawave GOLD said...
on Sep. 2 2011 at 2:13 pm
aveawave GOLD, Woolwich, New Jersey
10 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the angel you're sworn to be: spread your wings and fly" :)

thanks! I'll definately add to it! :D

on Sep. 1 2011 at 5:25 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

I feel like this is just skeleton for more awesomeness... describe what went on, and if anything, you could try playing with the format to make it look broken.

Keep it up!



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