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Don't Say, "I Love You"

Give me something real,
that I can see, hear, and feel.

Don't give me something fake,
like your smile, laughter, and high stakes.

Tell me the truth;
don't say, "I love you."



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writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 4:16 pm:
Very good! This could get published! Great job!!! :)(:
 
Raytheraym replied...
Sept. 14, 2011 at 4:13 pm :
Thank you!
 
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dark_armor1 said...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 12:27 am:
omg ! exacally how i feel !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haha good job! :)
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 10:44 am :
Thanks! :)
 
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Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 7:03 pm:
i really like it but i do think you could've made it a bit longer! besides i think its good!
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 8:36 pm :
Thanks! :)
 
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MagicMan2011 said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 8:43 pm:
it has a real nice flow. i would suggest expanding the idea a bit more, but it was still good.
 
Brandywrote replied...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 3:15 pm :

i like the "high stakes" part, it sounds like lady gaga bad romance kind of thing, this would be a really good beginng to a song =D can you check out my "Leaving the Forest" or "Sweet Angel"??

 

 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 3:46 pm :
Thank you both!
 
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