August 17, 2011
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Fireflies blinking
in the moonlight
crickets' chirping
drifting in the breeze

A darkened sky
like a large black
waiting to see
the sun's morning glow
arise in the east

Stars watching
looking down from above
in the deep blue pool
of the night

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albinotiger said...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 12:44 pm

Really good descriptive words its like im really there!

Maybe check out my stuff sometime

megsloveslions replied...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 12:49 pm
Thanks! Ill definitly check out yours!
LongLazyDays55 said...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 12:35 pm
Love the subject and the words you've used! Really good! :)
megsloveslions replied...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 12:51 pm
Thank you very much!
ByThisBlindingLight said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 8:11 pm
OMG love the word choice ^^ great work!!
samiasaskia24 replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 9:55 pm
I agree here! I really like your poems they are very beautiful!!!!!!
megsloveslions replied...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 4:15 pm
Thanks, 2 both of u lol
SeasofSorrow said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 10:18 am
I kind of want to sit down next to that girl who seems so entinced with something everyone sees...can I see it with her? will I see it the same way? It makes me long to feel absorbed with something mutual...simply because what is the mutual feeling is a feeling most pleasant for sure!
megsloveslions replied...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 2:24 pm
I wish I could see everything that way too... ;) thanks
Wonderment said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 10:15 am
I love the amount of discription. It paints a picture.:)
megsloveslions replied...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 10:29 am
Thanks soooo much! Like I said, I love comment! :)
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