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The silver lake of reflections,
The mute muffled soul’s abode,
In silent contemplation dwells,
Least movements, so still.

The blue sky bent down to earth,
On a cloud came a dream,
An Angel as languid as the breeze,
Came to see the spring.

Stirred the water here and there,
Forgot its wand of magic where,
Touched the lives in solitary blithe,
Rose in grace and splendour forsake.

The wild noise of hoofs on sand,
A pair of handsome white horse arrives,
The chariot of the Prince Moonbeam,
Came to drink the milk of solace.

The still lake’s reflection blurred,
Illusion wound eyes glare,
Radiating the dull moon light
Resonating the echoing hoofs.

The Irene of the still lake,
Levied by the spirits of night,
The blinding darkness luring to sin,
Blending light to dark and boon to bane.

The sun again to zeniths rose,
Never forgot to visit the lake.
Good, evil, lust and lure,
Touched maimed remold and waned…





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ajk24 said...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 10:18 am

hey this is fantabulous..keep on firing on all guns

 

 
LeyaSara replied...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 11:24 am
thank u so much...
 
survivor said...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 10:16 am
here is the making of a promising 21st century poet :)
 
Saju said...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 5:24 am
Excellent .....am proud of u my sis
 
dj733 said...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 9:47 am
nice 1 da.... :)
 
sN()mAanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 12:52 am
Excellent! Keep churning out those poems! :)
 
abcdefghijklmnopqrs said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 4:20 pm

Ur an xcellent poet n u ve proved it!!!

keep up this good work dear:)

 
vinu said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 12:13 pm

hey dude ur fabulous ......   da             gug luck

 

 
sherry said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 9:06 am
hey leya...as usual ur poem is amazing..i guess u hav to publish all the poems u wrote...
 
Tinu said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 6:07 am
good attempt.... keep trying.... lot of new things are their in this plannet.... keep watching them deeply & try to get new thoughts from that..
 
jenny said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 4:15 am

i loved ur poem...

wil b eagerly waitng 4 som more...

 
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