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You can't see your life
As a mirrored world.
It's not the real

YOU

Mirrors are fantasy.
You think you look back,
But you



CAN'T

Don't dwell on the past.
Look at the future.
Mirrors don't allow you to SEE

With future brings hope.
With mirrors bring regret.
Regret upon


YOURSELF

Set goals.
Reach them.
Allow yourself to see right THROUGH

Reflections are fake.
Your distant future
Isn't determined by
MIRRORS




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sarah98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 3:10 pm:
ah coooool i like this
 
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EHunt96 said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 3:43 pm:
Wow. I really enjoyed this. I love the mirror "image" of regret. Fantastic job!
 
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aveawave said...
Nov. 6, 2011 at 2:52 pm:
Thank you very much!
 
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nai.n.n. said...
Sept. 24, 2011 at 1:02 am:
simply beautiful.
 
aveawave replied...
Nov. 6, 2011 at 2:53 pm :
Thank you very, very much!
 
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BookOwl said...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 1:31 am:
I like this, and I think it's really cool how you did the caps. Could you look at some of my work?
 
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HateKnuckle said...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 5:13 pm:
Very nice. I really like the idea. Mirrors show the past and when you look behind you, you won't go anywhere. 4 stars. I really liked what you said, but not how you said it as much. However, it is still very good.
 
aveawave replied...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 5:16 pm :
thanks.! I need advice like that to help me improve :D
 
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yasmina.tabbal said...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 12:03 pm:
i guess that sometimes you can only wish that things are as perfect as how they seem in the mirror
 
aveawave replied...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 3:24 pm :
I know. :/
 
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aveawave said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 9:29 am:
The format of this got messed up! :/ It looked better when I submitted it, just so all of you know :P
 
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