Mirrors

August 7, 2011
By aveawave GOLD, Woolwich, New Jersey
aveawave GOLD, Woolwich, New Jersey
10 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the angel you're sworn to be: spread your wings and fly" :)


You can't see your life
As a mirrored world.
It's not the real

YOU

Mirrors are fantasy.
You think you look back,
But you



CAN'T

Don't dwell on the past.
Look at the future.
Mirrors don't allow you to SEE

With future brings hope.
With mirrors bring regret.
Regret upon


YOURSELF

Set goals.
Reach them.
Allow yourself to see right THROUGH

Reflections are fake.
Your distant future
Isn't determined by
MIRRORS


The author's comments:
Read this as is, from line to line, then at the end read the ALL CAPS words.

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sarah98 BRONZE said...
on May. 23 2013 at 3:10 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

ah coooool i like this

on Dec. 12 2011 at 3:43 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Wow. I really enjoyed this. I love the mirror "image" of regret. Fantastic job!

aveawave GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2011 at 2:53 pm
aveawave GOLD, Woolwich, New Jersey
10 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the angel you're sworn to be: spread your wings and fly" :)

Thank you very, very much!

aveawave GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2011 at 2:52 pm
aveawave GOLD, Woolwich, New Jersey
10 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the angel you're sworn to be: spread your wings and fly" :)

Thank you very much!

on Sep. 24 2011 at 1:02 am
NaiNelson PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
36 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Change in life is never easy, but you have to learn to deal with it because life doesn't slow down for stragglers.

simply beautiful.

on Sep. 19 2011 at 1:31 am
BookOwl PLATINUM, Bristol, Tennessee
32 articles 5 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is hard to fail, but it is worse never to have tried to succeed." Theodore Roosevelt

I like this, and I think it's really cool how you did the caps. Could you look at some of my work?

aveawave GOLD said...
on Sep. 2 2011 at 5:16 pm
aveawave GOLD, Woolwich, New Jersey
10 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the angel you're sworn to be: spread your wings and fly" :)

thanks.! I need advice like that to help me improve :D

on Sep. 2 2011 at 5:13 pm
HateKnuckle SILVER, Peru, New York
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Very nice. I really like the idea. Mirrors show the past and when you look behind you, you won't go anywhere. 4 stars. I really liked what you said, but not how you said it as much. However, it is still very good.

aveawave GOLD said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 3:24 pm
aveawave GOLD, Woolwich, New Jersey
10 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the angel you're sworn to be: spread your wings and fly" :)

I know. :/

on Aug. 23 2011 at 12:03 pm
yasmina.tabbal GOLD, Beirut, Other
10 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can get arrested for wearing those colors - Zach, A Chorus Line

i guess that sometimes you can only wish that things are as perfect as how they seem in the mirror

aveawave GOLD said...
on Aug. 18 2011 at 9:29 am
aveawave GOLD, Woolwich, New Jersey
10 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the angel you're sworn to be: spread your wings and fly" :)

The format of this got messed up! :/ It looked better when I submitted it, just so all of you know :P


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