amatuers in life

June 8, 2011
By greenbopp BRONZE, San Diego, California
greenbopp BRONZE, San Diego, California
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.You and I to a sunlight meadow went

low in a valley, to lie with hearts in hand

Like a fantasy from a wish upon a star

the never ending ones, thought up in a dream

To lose ourselves in all life's majesty

and wonder why we were given all this Wonder

Being young, we knew little of the Game

and thought our love eternal as the stars

couldn't find the invisible line between

our emotions and the Truth.

The author's comments:
this peice is based on Nemerov's "amatuers of heaven"

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