illusive identities

August 15, 2011
By doom010 BRONZE, 515151, Other
doom010 BRONZE, 515151, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Past is history ........Tomorrow is a mystery........ Today is a gift.

i love this quote------------
I am the master of my fate
I am the captain of my soul

I was standing in the middle of nowhere
but there were people everywhere
they had swords
but i had only my words

I saw a familiar face
so i ran to him at a quick pace
he was a friend whom i met in ninth grade
but he had his hands on his blade

I said "Hi" thrusting my hand forward
but he replied by plunging his sword forward
i dodged and punched him but he didnt even budge
he laughed viciously and i knew i had to take my grudge

The ground suddenly disappeared
so i closed my eyes as i fell into the darkness
i heard voices so i opened my eyes and was greeted with brightness

The author's comments:
This is a poem about a dream.....
I'm sorry that it's a bit short. This is my first poem ever so.....please let me know what you guys think.....thanks!

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on Aug. 16 2011 at 5:14 pm
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This is sooo good. I really liked it! Keep writing!!!!

on Aug. 16 2011 at 3:33 pm
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
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hey i read how you want feedback,so here it is! i realy enjoyed this so thanks for posting! im new on here(and i see that you are too) so if you could comment/rate my song i wrote called In The Distance, i would realy like that! thanks!!


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