illusive identities

August 15, 2011
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I was standing in the middle of nowhere
but there were people everywhere
they had swords
but i had only my words

I saw a familiar face
so i ran to him at a quick pace
he was a friend whom i met in ninth grade
but he had his hands on his blade

I said "Hi" thrusting my hand forward
but he replied by plunging his sword forward
i dodged and punched him but he didnt even budge
he laughed viciously and i knew i had to take my grudge

The ground suddenly disappeared
so i closed my eyes as i fell into the darkness
i heard voices so i opened my eyes and was greeted with brightness

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Kev-Girl said...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 3:33 pm
hey i read how you want feedback,so here it is! i realy enjoyed this so thanks for posting! im new on here(and i see that you are too) so if you could comment/rate my song i wrote called In The Distance, i would realy like that! thanks!!
XxMidnightKissxX replied...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 5:14 pm
This is sooo good. I really liked it! Keep writing!!!!
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