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illusive identities

August 15, 2011
By doom010 BRONZE, 515151, Other
doom010 BRONZE, 515151, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Past is history ........Tomorrow is a mystery........ Today is a gift.<br /> <br /> <br /> i love this quote------------<br /> I am the master of my fate<br /> I am the captain of my soul


I was standing in the middle of nowhere
but there were people everywhere
they had swords
but i had only my words

I saw a familiar face
so i ran to him at a quick pace
he was a friend whom i met in ninth grade
but he had his hands on his blade

I said "Hi" thrusting my hand forward
but he replied by plunging his sword forward
i dodged and punched him but he didnt even budge
he laughed viciously and i knew i had to take my grudge

The ground suddenly disappeared
so i closed my eyes as i fell into the darkness
i heard voices so i opened my eyes and was greeted with brightness


The author's comments:
This is a poem about a dream.....
I'm sorry that it's a bit short. This is my first poem ever so.....please let me know what you guys think.....thanks!

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on Aug. 16 2011 at 5:14 pm
XxMidnightKissxX SILVER, Hardinsburg, Indiana
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Love me or hate me, I don&#039;t care which, just don&#039;t try and change me.

This is sooo good. I really liked it! Keep writing!!!!

on Aug. 16 2011 at 3:33 pm
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
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Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :) <br /> <br /> Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing. <br /> <br /> If you cant annoy someone, there&#039;s no point in writing.<br /> <br /> Love is overrated, marry for money.

hey i read how you want feedback,so here it is! i realy enjoyed this so thanks for posting! im new on here(and i see that you are too) so if you could comment/rate my song i wrote called In The Distance, i would realy like that! thanks!!