August 12, 2011
By .love. BRONZE, Rockford, Illinois
.love. BRONZE, Rockford, Illinois
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It's a whirlwind romance
A single smile
A single touch
Then finally that fatal kiss.
It makes or breaks everything.
Sparks fly,
Nothing matters but the light pressure of soft lips upon soft lips
Heart beats speed up and then slow.
Beating to the same unending rhythm.
Just as feelings become wonderful,
the moment ends.
There is an emptiness
A single frown
A single tear
Then finally that feeling of loss, lust, and loneliness.
You're broken
You're gone forever
All for a whirlwind romance.

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Lovergirl GOLD said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 12:43 pm
Lovergirl GOLD, Gretna, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"don't jugde and ye won't be jugde" matthew 7:1
"If you don't know the trees you will get lost in the forest, but if you don't know the stories you will get lost in life' -Siderian Proverb

i so love this it funtastic

on Sep. 5 2011 at 9:12 pm
ZombieDanceWithMe SILVER, Rockford, Illinois
7 articles 1 photo 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
“To die is nothing; but it is terrible not to live”

-Victor Hugo

This is really good! It has a nice rhythm, I like it a lot! <3


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