Broken

August 12, 2011
By Sarah1311 DIAMOND, Clackamas, Oregon
Sarah1311 DIAMOND, Clackamas, Oregon
54 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To the world you may not be someone, but to someone you may be the world" and "Never frown because you never know who's fallen in love with your smile" <3


He broke and bruised my heart,
he tore it into two.
He left me in tears,
but then I met you.
You gathered up the pieces,
and put them back together,
you healed my bruises,
you even took my tears.
The heart I thought heart
I thought I lost,
is once again repaired.
The joy and love I thought was gone
is now fully there.
Your smile warms my heart,
your words light my day,
but then I stop and think,
will I really stay this way?
Will you forever be there whenever I call,
and will you be there to catch me
if I fall?
The things I love and need are here,
but will they always be?
Or will I end up bruised and broken,
with tears in my eyes
falling forever,
into the blackness that lies.



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on Aug. 19 2011 at 5:19 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

AWESOME! :d

on Aug. 19 2011 at 4:54 pm
Sarah1311 DIAMOND, Clackamas, Oregon
54 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To the world you may not be someone, but to someone you may be the world" and "Never frown because you never know who's fallen in love with your smile" <3

great to hear! :) I'm never going to stop writing so u'll have much to read. ;)

on Aug. 18 2011 at 6:10 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
45 articles 9 photos 565 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

:D I shall continue to post comments on all of your works.

on Aug. 18 2011 at 5:27 pm
Sarah1311 DIAMOND, Clackamas, Oregon
54 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To the world you may not be someone, but to someone you may be the world" and "Never frown because you never know who's fallen in love with your smile" <3

Thank you very much. I look forward to your future comments. :)

on Aug. 15 2011 at 10:14 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
45 articles 9 photos 565 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

This is very pretty and accurately describes the uncertainty and fear in a relationship.  Well done!


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