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Love entwined

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I see you,
Your face, your eyes and your smile.
Our hands intertwined.
You are mine.
I am yours.
Our world is the small space between our beating hearts.
Everything I need is you.
All my dreams are your words.
All your words are my dreams.
Love cannot describe this power I feel surge in my soul,
Whenever you speak a word.
I am nowhere if you are not there.



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ImSoCoolitHurts said...
Mar. 13, 2012 at 8:55 am:
Very nice, I like the feel of it. Other than perhaps adding length I really have no advice for you, Keep writing :)
 
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Jenga142 said...
Aug. 26, 2011 at 7:52 am:

hey , i am the author of this poem and was wandering if anyone who has read this poem will please give me some honest feedback so I know what to take into acount when writing in the future...... Thankyou xxx

 

 
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