I was Running

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I was running.
out of time,
out of breath,
out of ideas,
out of passion,
out of patience,
out of hope,
out of love,
I was Running,

Then you made me stop.





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Mroper38 said...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 7:21 pm
When I run, my thoughts disappear and go somewhere in a land unknown....
 
PoppyHasAHeart said...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 12:21 am
the words really flow together and the purpose and meaning of the poem are clear, yet leave the reader thinking. nicely done! :)
 
WinterFairy said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 8:44 pm
Very nice. I like how it's kind of "abrupt". Great job!! :)
 
MaggieElaine This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 10:46 pm
I agree completely. Keep up the good work :)
 
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