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So Cold

August 10, 2011
By Anonymous

Cold
with snow falling
chance calling
but the sound
has now gone
Cold

Hot
the sun's rays
i remember those days
but those hopes
have now gone
Cold

Warm
when together
we wanted forever
but you
have now gone
Cold

Chilly
the thought
our love is cought
but the chances
have not all gone
Cold

I'll wait all day
I'll wait all night
for when you think its right
to come home
where its not so
Cold

© Anonymous

The author's comments:
i was inspired by all the wives who are waiting for their husbands to come home from the war and they don't know if their husbands are ok or if theyre dead and they have little hope except for the hope of them coming home someday
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