Abandonment

August 6, 2011
By Anonymous

She left
She's gone
How could she do this
She knows this is wrong

No goodbyes
She doesn't care
I hope she dies
This isn't fair

I'm in tears
She's free to go
I hate myself
I hope she knows

Burning again
No stopping it now
She's the cause
She broke her vows

I wish I could die
I think I should leave
It seems like the world might be better
Without me

Knives to wrists
So close to being free
I can't do it though
Not to the people that love me

So here I am
Tears down my cheeks
Shutting down
Closing my eyes
Hoping to be found


The author's comments:
I wrote this piece the day my mom walked out on me.

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on Aug. 15 2011 at 4:56 pm
EnigmaticBeing PLATINUM, Santa Barbara, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Be careful what you set your heart upon - for it will surely be yours.'
James A. Baldwin

I'm so glad you could relate to this piece... I wasn't sure if I wanted to post it because of how close it is to my heart but I'm glad I did. I won't ever stop writing.

 


SweetLove3 said...
on Aug. 13 2011 at 7:00 pm
SweetLove3, Scranton, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
Never regret anything that ever made you smile!

This is absolutely amazing writing. And I can relate so much. People have left me in the past, and even now that I have found my void in life, life is still harsh. I have gone through the same emotions that you portray in this piece. Keep writing...cuz ur good.


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