May I?

August 5, 2011
By AvaDee94 BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
AvaDee94 BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Generally music feedeth that disposition of the spirits which it feedeth." - Francis Bacon

When your body becomes frail, who will be there to catch it? One day when you just give in without warning and you become sick, who will watch out for you? Let me be the one to help stand you up. To give you the secured feeling that your not alone. May I? If theres a limit i can wait. The way you twist your body, you can easily twist out this fate. You can build a chance, for love happiness and romance. Its sick how you play these games. When your done making it hard, who can you turn to when your worn out, no more strength. When you want to lay your head on ones shoulder, may I? May I, be the one to give you that invitation? Will you accept? The last chance, the last time. I want to take it. May I?

The author's comments:
my last love inspired me to write this. even though he's let me go, i will still be there for him when no one else is. the only thing is will he let me?

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on Oct. 27 2011 at 2:18 pm
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
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Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

It was really sweet, but I think it could be improved a lot if you seperated it into stanzas, it just makes for an easier read. You definitly have a lot of potential though!


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