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Your Painted Eden

July 31, 2011
By nomes GOLD, Hamden, Connecticut
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nomes GOLD, Hamden, Connecticut
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"Throughout life people will make you mad, disrespect you and treat you bad. Let god deal with the things they do, cause hate in your heart will consume you too."

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no one else can see this besides you
a picture perfect eden for you and me
this crowd only sees a blank canvas
I'd prefer you not show others
futile as it will be
I will not hold you
to any promise,word, or deed

I may stop writing
my work disappoints me
no need to discuss
i was never good with words
never sincere
not that i lie
just not enough spoken

© Alyssa J., Gibsonia, PA

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