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My Broken Fiction

July 31, 2011
By anisanasir_11 PLATINUM, Orlando, Other
anisanasir_11 PLATINUM, Orlando, Other
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Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream. -Edgar Allan Poe
~"Paper is more patient than people,"~Anne Frank
"Inspiration from the heart is written in the dark."~Anisa Nasir


The full moon lit up the sky
Shattered, smashed, destroyed, I cried
Where is this cure you speak of?
Fictitious memories, not a drop of love.

I thought of how destiny would bring us together
All a lie, it has been, I'm broken forever
Longing losses lookout to find the best
I looked up and found our story, none the less.

Hidden in the stars, completely inconspicuous
To break one's word, leads to consequence
Life slightly livable
Literally endurable.

Underestimating again, leaving me miserably misguided
What's to be done, still undecided
Eruptions of heartbreak
Begin to take place.

Not again
No, you don't get to win
The game goes on
One thing has changed, now I'm gone.


The author's comments:
This is a poetic representation of a time in my life when I thought all was lost and all I remembered was the lies, the fiction.

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on Aug. 20 2011 at 1:05 pm
anisanasir_11 PLATINUM, Orlando, Other
23 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream. -Edgar Allan Poe
~"Paper is more patient than people,"~Anne Frank
"Inspiration from the heart is written in the dark."~Anisa Nasir

Thank you :)

Dark_Mind GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2011 at 4:29 am
Dark_Mind GOLD, Little Rock, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
"Sounds like a Personal Problem."

I enjoyed the flow of this. It was a nice poem.