Widow's Dream

July 31, 2011
By xXx_Fox_xXx BRONZE, Conbe, Iowa
xXx_Fox_xXx BRONZE, Conbe, Iowa
4 articles 1 photo 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Where a rose is, a thistle can not grow" ~The Secret Garden
"Be the change you wish to see in the world" ~Ghandi
"Every road leads somewhere, its just a matter of where you want to go..." ~???


Lovely is the dream
What the widow dreamt
Lovely is the illusion
What the widow cries for
Lovely is her pat
What she lost
Lovely are her tears
That she cries without pause
Lovely was her heart
That is now black with sin
Lovely was her smile
Which is eternally broken
Lovely is the dream
That she dreamt
Lovely is the time
Where she didn't cry



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on Mar. 16 2012 at 9:39 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

All the 'what' s in the beginning kinda comfused me, they jarred my grammer-sense a bit. (Though I really don't pretend to have an unusually good one.) 

I think the way you put it together is really cool. 


on Sep. 7 2011 at 9:45 pm
xXx_Fox_xXx BRONZE, Conbe, Iowa
4 articles 1 photo 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Where a rose is, a thistle can not grow" ~The Secret Garden
"Be the change you wish to see in the world" ~Ghandi
"Every road leads somewhere, its just a matter of where you want to go..." ~???

No prob I found it to be astoundingly interesting ;)

on Sep. 7 2011 at 5:49 pm
Studio_Riet GOLD, Tonasket, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
" Times you see, is a little arrangement that man has made for himself to try to measure the immeasurable mysteries of life." -Calypso to Ulysses (Bernard Evslin.)
"You don't have a soul, you are a soul. You have a body" - CS Lewis

Ah . . . Sure. Fine. What ever. lol ^^  I actually think it is quite hilarious.

And thank you for cemmenting on my "Totoro" article. ^^


on Sep. 7 2011 at 5:38 pm
xXx_Fox_xXx BRONZE, Conbe, Iowa
4 articles 1 photo 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Where a rose is, a thistle can not grow" ~The Secret Garden
"Be the change you wish to see in the world" ~Ghandi
"Every road leads somewhere, its just a matter of where you want to go..." ~???

Yes yes I am is that okay lol

on Sep. 7 2011 at 5:20 pm
Studio_Riet GOLD, Tonasket, Washington
16 articles 0 photos 124 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Times you see, is a little arrangement that man has made for himself to try to measure the immeasurable mysteries of life." -Calypso to Ulysses (Bernard Evslin.)
"You don't have a soul, you are a soul. You have a body" - CS Lewis

Fox, It seams like almost every time you reply to my comments you say "Studio Ghibli!!" lol

haha. Are you just going to call me that?  ^^


on Sep. 2 2011 at 3:14 pm
xXx_Fox_xXx BRONZE, Conbe, Iowa
4 articles 1 photo 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Where a rose is, a thistle can not grow" ~The Secret Garden
"Be the change you wish to see in the world" ~Ghandi
"Every road leads somewhere, its just a matter of where you want to go..." ~???

Thanks Tanki :) ^^ THank you all lol if you want something Riddle-like then read My Dying Pain

on Sep. 1 2011 at 10:13 pm
Soulless BRONZE, Oskaloosa, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't think I'm crazy when I talk to myself.
I don't think I'm crazy when I answer myself, either.
It's the times when I have to ask myself to repeat what I said, because I wasn't paying enough attention in the first place, that worries me..."

I'm not big on poems, so you lose me If it doesn't rhyme :P nice work though!

on Sep. 1 2011 at 7:26 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~
~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~
~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than
a distant memory.~

Besides the morbidness [sic] of this poem , I enjoyed reading it. It flowed well and there were no spelling/punctation errors :)

on Aug. 24 2011 at 3:14 pm
xXx_Fox_xXx BRONZE, Conbe, Iowa
4 articles 1 photo 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Where a rose is, a thistle can not grow" ~The Secret Garden
"Be the change you wish to see in the world" ~Ghandi
"Every road leads somewhere, its just a matter of where you want to go..." ~???

Studio Ghibli!!! I remeber you!! lol I wrote come=ment on a fourm you were on......^^ THank you!!!! YOu were the first person to comment on this so thank you!!

on Aug. 23 2011 at 12:24 pm
Studio_Riet GOLD, Tonasket, Washington
16 articles 0 photos 124 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Times you see, is a little arrangement that man has made for himself to try to measure the immeasurable mysteries of life." -Calypso to Ulysses (Bernard Evslin.)
"You don't have a soul, you are a soul. You have a body" - CS Lewis

Wow. Pretty. It sounds kind of sad, though. But I guess widows are pretty much sad one way or another. :(  This is a nice poem, though. I likey it ;)


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