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The unshared love

July 31, 2011
By kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.


His love to her started with a thought,
Understood that he was fallen in love,
Just as a friend, by her, he was sought.
But his feelings about her went more than above.

He would fall for her again and again,
Feeling helpless himself, to stop from that.
Still, didn’t know about love’s pain,
Because, he never was put to be that way!

Was so in love with her, but
He never mentioned the word ‘Love’ at her.
Although, he had worries about it, not even a bit.
Not thinking, how it would be, later, still having the love unshared.

He was as; the fate would decide their love to join.
And in the future, he won’t be alone…
Times had passed; there was no love or anything,
When he realized that she was forever gone.
Then he thought, ‘why had I the love unshared?’


The author's comments:
No matter how great the love is, it has to revealed and not have it just inside ourselves. If not, that will be regrettable.

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on Dec. 23 2011 at 3:46 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
21 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan"
-by. Blood On The Dance Floor

true but idk i mean ive come close to dying cuz of being badly injured cuz of fights ive been in but no one cares so oh well.

on Dec. 22 2011 at 11:04 pm
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

Dont worry...... That will not be helpful now... Too late isnt it? But its a lesson.... Only thing is that u were not lucky enough this time!!! U still have time! :)

on Dec. 22 2011 at 2:59 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
21 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan"
-by. Blood On The Dance Floor

yeah but i never dated him but i wanted to, i guess life is just full of disappoinment.

on Dec. 22 2011 at 10:03 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

thanks dude...... i alrdy told u, u r one man with passion!

on Dec. 21 2011 at 1:33 am
theheart_thatisbroken SILVER, ROME GA, Georgia
8 articles 1 photo 35 comments
was beautiful made me cry

on Dec. 21 2011 at 1:00 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

I pray for that... ;)

tnx


on Dec. 21 2011 at 12:59 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

:))))

I've always worried that smthin like this shud not happen to me....... That kinda helps me to realize how painful it is............

There's nothin' worse than losing a partner, right?

THank god u came over that misery!


on Dec. 19 2011 at 6:14 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
21 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan"
-by. Blood On The Dance Floor

its ok, i had learned how to deal with the deprssion.....now im currently suffring from depression but i guess im fine

zee11 said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 9:21 pm
zee11, Kandy, Other
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awesome poem....keep it up!!!!

on Dec. 18 2011 at 8:14 pm
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

thank u....

and..... Sorry bout wat happened!


on Dec. 18 2011 at 4:16 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
21 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan"
-by. Blood On The Dance Floor

reall good poem. i loved it.

As i was reading the poem it had made me think of this one guy i liked last year and when i realized tht i loved him.....it was to late cuz the night before i txted his phone explaining everything he had commited suicide cuz he friends had told him tht i didnt like him, so i never even got the chance to tell him anything tht i was holding back for 2yrs


Lit.rox BRONZE said...
on Dec. 17 2011 at 9:13 am
Lit.rox BRONZE, Kandy, Other
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good work!! keep it up...

 


cookiegirl said...
on Dec. 17 2011 at 1:09 am
Nice poem, well written. Keep up the great work :).

ahmedstki said...
on Nov. 21 2011 at 6:18 am
ahmedstki, Mawanella, Other
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Woow, it was very beautiful and the writting was very advanced. It's the way what it realy means and it's true.