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His love to her started with a thought,
Understood that he was fallen in love,
Just as a friend, by her, he was sought.
But his feelings about her went more than above.

He would fall for her again and again,
Feeling helpless himself, to stop from that.
Still, didn’t know about love’s pain,
Because, he never was put to be that way!

Was so in love with her, but
He never mentioned the word ‘Love’ at her.
Although, he had worries about it, not even a bit.
Not thinking, how it would be, later, still having the love unshared.

He was as; the fate would decide their love to join.
And in the future, he won’t be alone…
Times had passed; there was no love or anything,
When he realized that she was forever gone.
Then he thought, ‘why had I the love unshared?’



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KahaaniThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 20, 2012 at 11:54 pm:
A very nice and sweet poem. Nice work. :)
 
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Sabeeha N. said...
Feb. 7, 2012 at 8:48 pm:
This a very interesting poem ever read before...i mean a different one i really felt it when i read...thank you for posting
 
Muzee3 replied...
Feb. 8, 2012 at 10:41 am :
thanks yo! yah......anytime!
 
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Tbug1997 said...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 8:48 am:
Beautiful i loved it you are an awesome writer
 
Muzee3 replied...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 8:53 am :
thanx dude!
 
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chloe_garrett said...
Jan. 23, 2012 at 8:53 am:
awww i love this. You are a very good writer. I enjoy reading your work! :D
 
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 10:14 am :
Thank u very much. :) so were yours, I must say! ;)
 
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shn47 said...
Jan. 12, 2012 at 12:36 am:
Superb and well written, since i know you it reminds me of your status.
 
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 2:18 am :
Thanks! WoAh, dude, lets have it with us!
 
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toniteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 5:20 am:
okay........i know this sounds weird but i cried......this is sooooooo touching and sooooooo true
 
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 11:28 am :
Hey. . Thank u 4 being so positive. . Tat was sweet, anyway! ;)
 
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pixxielove said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 12:07 pm:
is a true thing... happens every day
 
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 11:24 pm :
Yah, we've only got to be strong enough to not fall into depression the disease!
 
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POET_MAN16 said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 4:54 am:
tha is true it happend to me plenty of times this was a great poem
 
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 11:22 pm :
Never mind if u share them... ;)
 
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WolfofDarkness said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 2:19 pm:
This is very nice. Great writing, filled with emotion, and a lesson. Keep up the good work.
 
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 11:39 am :
Thank you. It really is very pathetic if something like this hapenin in real, isnt it?
 
WolfofRoses replied...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 7:19 pm :
No, i dont think its pathetic. I think its a main part of life, even if i dont understand it.
 
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 11:54 am :
It is pathetic when the love is unshared! thats what i meant.
 
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POET_MAN16 said...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 1:33 am:
was beautiful made me cry
 
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