The Game of Life

July 30, 2011
By JTboiiDrama PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
JTboiiDrama PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
27 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is what it is


Life is chance and chance is life, it brings you joy it brings you strife, it cuts you up just like a knife and heals you new right overnight.


The author's comments:
Life can be good and life can be bad thats all im getting at

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on Jul. 9 2014 at 11:09 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack
Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn
You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

Live life to the fullest

on Aug. 8 2011 at 9:51 pm
WithPenAndScript DIAMOND, Venetia, Pennsylvania
72 articles 232 photos 252 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe that no matter who you are we all leave footprints on this Earth

I like teh rhymes and I like the rhythem. I;ve noticed your poems are usually just a few lines, have you ever though to write longer ones? 

on Aug. 7 2011 at 11:04 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

Very nice rhythm. It read very smoothly, and I love what you're saying. Well done!!! :)

on Aug. 6 2011 at 4:17 pm
ossiecastro5 PLATINUM, A Single Light In, New Jersey
39 articles 9 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm not saying anything, I'm just saying.

I like what you mean in this one.

wasps said...
on Aug. 6 2011 at 3:43 pm
wasps, Other
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Good :) Though I think that some of your poems are more like song lyrics, so you should probs put them there :)


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