The Game of Life

Life is chance and chance is life, it brings you joy it brings you strife, it cuts you up just like a knife and heals you new right overnight.





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KylineF said...
Jul. 9, 2014 at 11:09 pm
Live life to the fullest
 
WithPenAndScript said...
Aug. 8, 2011 at 9:51 pm
I like teh rhymes and I like the rhythem. I;ve noticed your poems are usually just a few lines, have you ever though to write longer ones? 
 
Garnet77 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 7, 2011 at 11:04 am
Very nice rhythm. It read very smoothly, and I love what you're saying. Well done!!! :)
 
Osvaldo_C said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 4:17 pm
I like what you mean in this one.
 
Snake_Tongue said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 3:43 pm
Good :) Though I think that some of your poems are more like song lyrics, so you should probs put them there :)
 
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