Miles and Miles and Miles...

August 2, 2011
By SocialPariah GOLD, Laurel, Maryland
SocialPariah GOLD, Laurel, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
A dream is just a recycled memory.


Have you ever been inside a cave
With no opening in the end?
No sunlight shining through,
No light to guide you home.
The rocks are rough beneath your feet,
And your inside feel so cold
So cold that you can barely feel,
Anything at all
Thirsty lies deep within your soul
You hunger for company
But theres no one to lean on
No one to hold on to
No place for sweet comfort
Continue walking through that cave
Hoping for an end
Even though it seems endless
You still keep walking
Sharp rocks scratch your body
Blood trickles down your skin
Later on you'll have scars
But you don't care about them
You just want to keep walking
Down the cave with no end
Unaware that your destination
Is nothing but a dead end



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on Aug. 30 2011 at 9:38 pm
Black_Veil_Bridesmaid GOLD, Frisco, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Sui.icide is not cowardly. What is cowardly is making somebody hurt so much they want to kill themselves." Ashley Purdy
"Money can't buy happiness, but it can buy bacon, and thats pretty much the same thing." Andy Biersack
"Your not alone" Andy B

Wow.. That was beautiful!!

on Aug. 10 2011 at 7:15 pm
SocialPariah GOLD, Laurel, Maryland
16 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
A dream is just a recycled memory.

Thanks so much :)  this was my first post on here so im glad u liked it

GABSALOTT96 said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 11:25 pm
GABSALOTT96, Lake Wylie, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain."
— Bob Marley

Wow this was gr8!  i think u played 2 the helpless feel of the poem but didnt over do it, like u still gave a touch of like reality at the end, kinda balancing it out! keep it up!


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