Beautiful

August 3, 2011
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Battling my facial anatomy in the mirror again,
Every day is the same damn dissapointment.
Average eyes, unattractive.
Unfortunatley not pretty enough.
Telling myself that one day it will get better.
If only I could lie better.
For now I'll have to pretend.
Unknown to the rest of the world,
Loneliness is ugliness.





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billlover420 said...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 6:51 pm
suchh a good poem i relate to what u have to say in this is soo short but goes to wat the feeling is its amazeing
 
GothChik95 replied...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 7:15 pm
Thanks one of the reasons that it's short is because it's an acrostic poem (if you didn't notice) and the word beautiful is only so long, but yea I'm really proud of this one :)
 
-deedeshay said...
Aug. 7, 2011 at 3:53 pm
- wonderfull poem short & meaningfull!
 
lovetildeath said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 3:23 pm
Many can relate
 
Kbuschan said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 11:34 pm
it sounds amazing, like in the beginning it feels like the reader is right there with you and then the last statement is so strong. great job :)
 
kaykaybeck said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 9:33 pm
This is really good.! Check out some of my work?
 
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