These Hoodies Show Life

July 27, 2011
By Rivan SILVER, Westfield, Other
Rivan SILVER, Westfield, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Clever as the devil and twice as pretty. -Holly Black


You in that blue hoodie,
Smile at me, I feel as if I could fly
I could dance on cotton clouds forever

You in that green hoodie,
Smell of pine and earthy ground
We plant in the garden together

You in that red hoodie,
On your first date with me, I am beaming
We sail and glide effortlessly in sync

You in that gray hoodie,
Look tired and worn to the bone,
You and I sit on the porch in the yard

You in those hoodies,
Make my days fill with color,
Now we are 90ty and are looking,
at memories from long ago


The author's comments:
This is dedicated to my blue abercrombie hoodie.

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on Jan. 15 2012 at 6:03 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

This is going on my favorites. I love how you wrote this, how you created a scene with each color hoodie....5/5 =)

Rivan SILVER said...
on Aug. 4 2011 at 10:16 am
Rivan SILVER, Westfield, Other
8 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Clever as the devil and twice as pretty. -Holly Black

thanks that was just a thought

emily G. said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 9:27 pm

very unique! i like it :)

 


emily G. said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 9:22 pm
that's very unique! i like it ;)


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