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Gone forever

August 1, 2011
By lovetildeath GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
lovetildeath GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
I'm selfish, impatient, & a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control, & at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best.
- Marilyn Monroe


They said you were gone
In a split second
The words cut right through me
My life changed in one second
One second
One second is all it take
I still don't believe it
That all it took was one second
And you were gone forever
With all the other names in on tombstones
Now I lay flowers and letters over yours
Asking why you left me
Now I memorize those words on your grave


The author's comments:
I lost a good friend to sucide and it really changed me.

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on Aug. 5 2011 at 12:37 pm
GirlLovingLife SILVER, Rocky Ford, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"There are some secrets which do not permit themselves to be told."
— Edgar Allan Poe

Thanks and she is doing better and your right to many people try or do commit suicide =(

 


on Aug. 4 2011 at 11:06 pm
lovetildeath GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
10 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm selfish, impatient, & a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control, & at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best.
- Marilyn Monroe

Thank you and I hopeyour friend will find the joy of living.There are too many teens killing themselves  :(

on Aug. 4 2011 at 5:30 pm
GirlLovingLife SILVER, Rocky Ford, Colorado
5 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There are some secrets which do not permit themselves to be told."
— Edgar Allan Poe

When I read this I thought of my friend who has tried commiting suicide countless times, she almost died from it. I'm sorry you'r friend wasn't so luck... keep writing you are really good =)