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Hello You, Goodbye Me

Hello You! Hi Me!
You're really cute you know
Thank you
Would you like to go out with me

Hello you. Hi me.
You wore that shirt twice this month.
But it’s my favorite

Hello you, hi me
Start parting your hair on the right side

Hello you .
You're wearing the shoes I bought you, good
And parting your hair the way I told you, great
You painted your nails the color I like
You did everything I told you to do. Good Job

Goodbye Me

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FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 10:06 pm
This is impressive and expressive at the same time! I like how you show how people change!! Great job!!
Medina D. said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 7:42 pm
That was the most interesting poem i ever truly defines the phrase "talking to yourself"
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