A Gift

July 24, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them


We have received
A gift
It is a gift of
True beauty
It is a gift we
Have yet to receive
To it's full
Extent
It is a gift that
We truly do not deserve
It is a God given
Gift
Our world was given
The gift of
Music!!


The author's comments:
Music is what keeps me going it is a gift

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on Aug. 25 2011 at 10:15 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks i agree now that it's posted the exclamation points aren't very prfessional sorry

on Aug. 24 2011 at 10:08 pm
snaomi PLATINUM, Cheshire, Connecticut
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I agree with the sentiment of the poem and like the idea that we haven't yet received the gift to its fullest extent.  I do think, though, that the exclamation points at the end are a little unnecessary and take away some of the impact of the poem

on Aug. 16 2011 at 8:03 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

aw, thanks that means alot

on Aug. 16 2011 at 7:57 pm
BreeTayler PLATINUM, Carlisle, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
"Where there is love there is life." --Ghandi

I loved it. Music really does make the world go round. Lol ... Well, that and love and money and God, of course haha... Your style is very unique.. Original. It's inspiring:)

on Aug. 9 2011 at 1:48 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

same here luv ya :P !!

on Aug. 9 2011 at 12:47 pm
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER, San Jacinto, California
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes it not about winning the race,its just being apart of it."
"Life's like an hour glass glued to a table."

love it and lovve music its my happy placee ahha

on Aug. 6 2011 at 2:26 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks i love music

on Aug. 6 2011 at 10:42 am
Ha-5-rika SILVER, Visakapatnam, Other
9 articles 7 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is what your thoughts make it.
Happiness, success and the greatest of achievements are nothing if you don't have someone to share it with.
A life lived for others is a life worthwhile - Albert Einstein.

You are an amazing short poem writer yourself. I love this poem because it speaks of music. I love music.

on Aug. 2 2011 at 3:25 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thans !! :P

on Aug. 2 2011 at 1:19 am
white_chocolate97 BRONZE, Singapore, Other
1 article 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.

Great job. I like the way you broke up the lines.

on Aug. 1 2011 at 3:06 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks and sorry

on Aug. 1 2011 at 3:00 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Another great poem!  My only criticism is the ending line.  "Music!!" should only have one exclamation point.

Other than that, great job!



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